I hope it's not the JFF paying his way to and from England...he is out of contract so him better find himself back here on his dime
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Using one sentence, it should read:
"As the team fine tunes for the defence of their Caribbean title between December 7-16,at a training session at the JFF Technical Centre,assistant coach Alfredo Montesso told the Jamaica Observer yesterday that Gardner, along with fellow England-based Keammar Daley and the USA-based duo of Ryan Johnson and Omar Cummings, is expected to join the Jamaican camp"Hey .. look at the bright side .... at least you're not a Liverpool fan! - Lazie 2/24/10 Paul Marin -19 is one thing, 20 is a whole other matter. It gets even worse if they win the UCL. *groan*. 05/18/2011.MU fans naah cough, but all a unuh a vomit?-Lazie 1/11/2015
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Disagreed, this is the reason we do not have player development. We are not talking of the woldcup here or even he Hex. We are talking about using some players who will not play or should not play in the Hex. So If I were the TD and I knew that it would be Bennet playing as my striker along with Shelton there is no reason for me to feature a 34 year old in the build up. I would use my younger players so they get the experience and develop. If you are talking about the world cup and you think Bibi is going to help that is different. There is a kid a colubus crew I am trying to understand why they dont rate him. Also Kahari Stevens is a name that seems to be skipped... Point is we cant have it both ways.. we want youth dev but dont know how to do it.
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Originally posted by Jangle View PostUsing one sentence, it should read:
"As the team fine tunes for the defence of their Caribbean title between December 7-16,at a training session at the JFF Technical Centre,assistant coach Alfredo Montesso told the Jamaica Observer yesterday that Gardner, along with fellow England-based Keammar Daley and the USA-based duo of Ryan Johnson and Omar Cummings, is expected to join the Jamaican camp"Peter R
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The first one was crape so I just wanted to clean it up by using the same words, but I couldn't without Addison "that " in it.Hey .. look at the bright side .... at least you're not a Liverpool fan! - Lazie 2/24/10 Paul Marin -19 is one thing, 20 is a whole other matter. It gets even worse if they win the UCL. *groan*. 05/18/2011.MU fans naah cough, but all a unuh a vomit?-Lazie 1/11/2015
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Originally posted by HL View PostYes sentence structure. Singular subject-singular verb.
Much has been said about the editing of Jamaican newspaper.
Also, the writer could have made three sentences from the very long one quoted. It would make for simplicity and ease in reading....
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Reggaedoc, what do Americans (HL) know about the English Language!?!
If I have a problem with the sentence it would the rambling length of it and this part - "...as the team finetunes for the defence of their Caribbean title between December 7-16."
I would say, "as the team finetunes for the defence of ITS Caribbean title between December 7-16."
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Originally posted by Reggaedoc View PostPerfectly normal sentence. The subject, Gardner is singular, the other names are simply spactator nouns, were contained between commas, and the sense of the sentence would not have changed if they were left out. So the sentence is totally correct. Ironically, Jamaicans tend to get tempted in pleuralizing the verb in these instances, which is incorrect.Peter R
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Originally posted by Mosiah View PostReggaedoc, what do Americans (HL) know about the English Language!?!
If I have a problem with the sentence it would the rambling length of it and this part - "...as the team finetunes for the defence of their Caribbean title between December 7-16."
I would say, "as the team finetunes for the defence of ITS Caribbean title between December 7-16."
Now, the rambling nature of the sentence is another issue.
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