JFF Website: Story On Daniel Gordon

[Bruce]

http://www.jamaicafootballfederation...amaican-dream/

This story on Daniel Gordon is on the JFF website. It appeared yesterday, but was so full of glaring errors, I was embarrassed to post it then. The original story said Daniel was playing for Rotweiss Oberhausen, his old team, in the big time Bundesiga, not in Bundesliga 2, the second division. I bet Daniel and my internet buddy in Oberhausen wishes that were true.

I left a comment, officially awaiting moderation, with the correct information that Daniel now plays for FSV Frankfurt in Bundesliga 2.

That information has been corrected in the story.

I also objected to the lead sentence "Although not a popular name, Daniel Gordon...." That implies Daniel did something horrible. I suggested "Although not a WELL-KNOWN name......"

[Paul Marin]

http://www.jamaicafootballfederation...amaican-dream/

This story on Daniel Gordon is on the JFF website. It appeared yesterday, but was so full of glaring errors, I was embarrassed to post it then. The original story said Daniel was playing for Rotweiss Oberhausen, his old team, in the big time Bundesiga, not in Bundesliga 2, the second division. I bet Daniel and my internet buddy in Oberhausen wishes that were true.

I left a comment, officially awaiting moderation, with the correct information that Daniel now plays for FSV Frankfurt in Bundesliga 2.

That information has been corrected in the story.

I also objected to the lead sentence "Although not a popular name, Daniel Gordon...." That implies Daniel did something horrible. I suggested "Although not a WELL-KNOWN name......"

Well done Bruce. You should correct some of Jangle and Lazie's posts on here the same way (but don't hold your breath for them to correct them, you'll be old and gray before that happens )

[Bruce]

I am already old and gray !

[Paul Marin]

I am already old and gray !

Older and grayer?